For this brochure, I completely changed the format. Along the top will be a sort of adhesive device to hold everything together in the end, I'm not sure what that will be yet...when I figure it out I'll let you know. As for the logo it will be embossed in the paper, I'm definitely thinking the thicker butcher paper esque style so we can emboss.
As for the 2nd page you see with the Henry David Thoreau quote, I used it because it is what the organization is doing for the kids, getting them ready to accomplish their dreams. This page will be printed on something like tracing paper so you will be able to see through to the next page.
The spread is not fully complete, I wanted to have some time to spend on the sketches to put in the background so there wont be so much negative space.
Hi ashley
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seems like a nice structure, but i can't help think something else is needed. maybe use the graphics at end throughout- or introduce graphics in a different way (as background, subtle textures for instace) to help punch up the pages. not sure just shape and type is enough, problems with hierarchy on some spreads. maybe this is solved when holding the printed piece- can not tell from online version these things sometimes. not sure black works on the end photos, why not color or subdued intensity color, looking hand colored maybe. or sepia comes to mind to at least try. black is separating right now for me. also not sure what is front and back online.
hope this helps,
good luck,
-ed