I don't know how I feel about the letters bleeding off the top an bottom. maybe try bleeding off one side. Also, I think that you could make the W a tad wider. just a thought.
I like the choice of typefaces and I think they are working together well. I agree that I don't like how the letters break the squares on top and bottom. Try just the bottom or not at all. Shift the W over the left just a touch. It's definitely almost there! Good work!
This logo is working much better and I think the square containers for the letters is a much better solution than the circles were. I like your type, it feels young and fun. If nothing else I would play with the the positions of the letters WYN in the squares. I'm not completely satisfied with them the way they are now.
I don't know how I feel about the letters bleeding off the top an bottom. maybe try bleeding off one side. Also, I think that you could make the W a tad wider. just a thought.
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I like the choice of typefaces and I think they are working together well. I agree that I don't like how the letters break the squares on top and bottom. Try just the bottom or not at all. Shift the W over the left just a touch. It's definitely almost there! Good work!
ReplyDeleteThis logo is working much better and I think the square containers for the letters is a much better solution than the circles were. I like your type, it feels young and fun. If nothing else I would play with the the positions of the letters WYN in the squares. I'm not completely satisfied with them the way they are now.
ReplyDeleteI really love the changes you've made since we last saw this! It's getting stronger and stronger!
ReplyDeleteThe logo is looking good. Keep working on the containing shapes of WYN. I think having no bleed would be stronger. Nice progress.
ReplyDeleteit has a very nice inviting feeling to it, diggin the typeface combo
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